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Catherine Lynch& Glenn Collins's avatar

Beautiful, soothing words. A balm for the heart in pain. ❤️

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The Braver Mom's avatar

This is simple and beautiful. I read your note sharing this life and death threshold experience. I've been there too, with my father in law as well. Caring for him in his last moments, it is such an honor. I wish you healing but having been there, the pain will is just there, you just learn to live with it somehow.

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Tahia Sherebanou Fakhri's avatar

It truly was an honor and he will be missed.

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Coffee Times's avatar

Beautifully crafted poem. The verses delicately unfold the impact on those left behind—the void, the silence, and the poignant search for a place in the absence. It's a touching exploration of grief and the ways in which we carry the essence of those we've lost into the future.

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Sameena's avatar

Touched my heart. Beautifully written

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Fazila's avatar

So well penned ... its hard to say goodbye

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Sherebanu Moosajee's avatar

That’s a beautiful tribute .

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Sameena saboowala's avatar

Beautiful

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Karen Kartika's avatar

Beautiful poem with gentle & soothing energy presence in this writing amidst the circumstance.

My heart goes out to you 💛

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Tahia Sherebanou Fakhri's avatar

Thank you🙏

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